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Title: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 21, 2007, 09:47:44 pm Why do you want to be a match writer? It's been my life's dream to be a match writer for an E-fed of this caliber
What sets you apart for the others? I'm a chameleon who writes matches, c'mon, what's better than that? Write this match(Sub-Zero vs Scorpion; You pick the winner) "Sub-Zero vs. Scorpion...Round 1...FIGHT" Sub-Zero is on the left and Scorpion is on the right. The circle around each other and then Sub-Zero jumps and lands a flying kick on Scorpion. Sub-Zero follows that up by kicking Scorpion into the air and freezing him after he hits the ground. He follows with a 4-punch combo and on the 5th Punch, Scorpion blocks it and counters with a vicious roundhouse kick to Sub-Zero's head. Sub-Zero falls to the ground and runs to the opposite end of the room. Scorpion launches his spear, and nearly catches Sub-Zero with it, but Sub-Zero jumps and avoids the spear and punches Scorpion. Sub-Zero tries to freeze Scorpion again, but Scorp ducks and uppercuts Sub-Zero into the Upper Levels... Toasty: Whooopsy!!! Ed Boon: Did you see that? He just blasted Sub-Zero into oblivion!! Toasty: Whooopsy!!! Ed Boon: Is that all you ever say?? Scorpion follows Sub-Zero to the upper level and blasts him with a fireball. While Sub-Zero's down, Scorpion taunts him by ripping off his mask and putting it back on. He lifts up Sub-Zero and throws him into a wall. Then shoots his spear at him yet again, this time connecting and dragging Sub-Zero back to him and throwing a vicious uppercut sending Sub-Zero flying through the air. "End of Round 1" Ed Boon: Wow, what a great first round! I can't wait to see the rest of this fight Toasty: TOASTYY!! "Sub-Zero vs. Scorpion...Round 2...FIGHT!" Scorpion rushes at Sub-Zero quickly and connects with a sweep and follows it up with a 4-Punch combo and a High Kick to Sub-Zero's jaw. He slams Sub-Zero and again taunts him. While Scorpion is taunting, Sub-Zero gets up and does his Ice Slice Kick technique, causing Scorpion to fly backwards and lose his mask. Scorpion is crawling around trying to grab his mask and Sub-Zero jumps over and grabs the mask and freezes it. Then he smashed the frozen mask over Scorpion, knocking him to the ground. Sub-Zero kicks him several times while he is on the ground. Then he lifts him up and delivers a vicious backbreaker. Scorpion is struggling to his feet and while doing this, Sub-Zero shoots a shower of ice into the air, freezing Scorpion. Sub-Zero rushes to the frozen Scorpion and delivers a vicious uppercut and then follows that up quickly with a brutal kick to the face. He attempts another kick to Scorpion's face, but Scorpion jumps over him and throws several punches to Sub-Zero's head. Sub-Zero falls to the ground and tries to get up quickly, but Scorpion is too quick and hits him with a backflip kick, knocking him to the ground. Sub-Zero is very slow to get to his feet, and is groggy when he stands up... "FINISH HIM" Scorpion shoots his spear into Sub-Zero's left arm and rips it off. He then shoots the spear into Sub-Zero's right leg and rips it off as well. Scorpion then walks over to the brutalized Sub-Zero and grabs his head, and proceeds to snap his neck. "Scorpion wins...FATALITY" How was that? Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Scorpion on June 21, 2007, 09:51:03 pm I like it.
We'll wait for 1-2 more than me and Sub will decide Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 21, 2007, 09:59:32 pm Do u like it just because i had you win, or because it was actually a decent match? lol im just wondering
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 21, 2007, 10:05:07 pm i liked it but dont make it funny with the woopsie part, make it serious
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 21, 2007, 10:06:43 pm lol i won't, i just didn't know what else to make him say
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Scorpion on June 22, 2007, 06:13:49 am I liked it because it was good
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 22, 2007, 12:09:22 pm overall good
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 22, 2007, 12:10:21 pm Thank you, I appreciate the feedback
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 22, 2007, 12:17:00 pm and nice fatality description but try to make it a bit longer
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 22, 2007, 12:20:08 pm Make what longer, the match or the fatality?
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 22, 2007, 12:21:11 pm both, add maybe a line or two to each and it would be perfect
ot: add more blocks Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 22, 2007, 12:23:55 pm Blocks as in blocks of info/description? If so, i can do that
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 22, 2007, 12:25:04 pm no like
scorpion goes for a uppercut, BLOCKED by sub-zero, sub-zero reverses it into a piledriver, but scorpion slips out... Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 22, 2007, 12:25:58 pm Oohhh i see...Yeah i can do that too lol
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 22, 2007, 12:27:30 pm lol, try to make them cool too, like sub-zero avoids a spear by running up a tree or something along those lines
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Noob Saibot on June 22, 2007, 12:33:24 pm and be more descriptive :)
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Chameleon on June 22, 2007, 12:35:49 pm Alright, alright...I can do that...I'm not even a writer yet though, but if i do become one, i will be sure to take these suggestions into consideration lol
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Reptile on June 22, 2007, 12:44:53 pm kk
Title: Re: Chameleon wants to write matches!!! Post by: Sub Zero on June 27, 2007, 02:07:48 pm or i can poke ur eyes |